another impulsive poem on loneliness
61loneliness
I'm at a party
And friends are having fun
I'm in the midst of it all
Yet so far away.
I'm at home
It's festival time
All loved ones are gathered
Having merry time
I'm there too
Yet so far away.
My friend calls out to me
My mother yells out my name
But the only call I respond to
The only call I can hear
Is that of loneliness
Kenny Wordsmith Level 1 Commenter 4 years ago
Ah, I share that feeling sometimes. In the midst of a crowd, I am lonely.I am there, and somewhere else far away.
But i can't write a beautiful poem about it like you do! Thank you, Kavitha.
Great writing, give us more!