another untitled poem

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By kavitha

a scent of romance ?!

 

I see that past

The days our eyes met

You had a broad smile

Mine was half-hearted

But you persisted

With that pure heart of yours

With your untainted love.

It began with silent exchanges

Sweet words

Then the flowers

The wonderful conversations...

Under the shade

Of the Big Banyan tree

We would talk for hours

And before we realised

The sun would give way to the moon

Parting words were painful...

But we left each other

With the hope of another day

Another new beginning...

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Kenny Wordsmith Level 1 Commenter 4 years ago

Sweet sorrow, but there's always tomorrow.

Great poem, thank you, Kavitha.

B.Prakash 4 years ago

Hi Kavitha, I could see the depth in it....in fact, parting is always painful whether it is for one year, month, day or even a minute especially in such a situation where there is real love...even if we get a new begining by the next day, y'days memory gives or makes us more strong...to go ahead to tomorrows...Good poem, Kavitha. Loved it...it touched my heart....!

with Love,

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